Essay check-141 Some people think that the government is wasting money on the arts and that this money could spend better elsewhere. To what extent to do you agree or disagree?

It is argued by some that government is spending a lot of money on arts instead of that, it could be spent somewhere else on useful things. In my opinion, I completely agree that other sources/SECTORS such as health and education are much more important and they should spend the amount on them which is wistful.

To begin with, the main reason is that the government can spend a sufficient amount of money on studies rather than wasting on arts such as museums and galleries.= THIS IS WHAT THE QUESTION SAYS, ITS NOT THE REASON

 This is to say that by providing enough amount of funds on educating children, owing to this children’s/CHILDREN are able to get a quality amount of study and in future, they might/WILL be helpful to society. As a result, the government is spending an immense amount of money on children education for a better, life. For instance, in the US every year government effort to spend an enormous amount on studies through this plenty of students graduate every with excellence and helpful to their country.

Furthermore, the government should also spend cash on health problems because a lot of people are dying out due to sufficient treatment. This is to say that if the government allocate an adequate amount of money on health issues and medication owing to this most of the people can be cured and live healthily. Consequently, By providing sufficient money on health issues there won’t be any health issues can be faced in future.

To conclude, since education and health play an important role in  the lives of people ,so that it is very important for the government to make sure that funds are spent properly on health care and studies.

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TASK RESPONSE= QUESTION ASKS THE REASONS OF YOUR OPINION, THAT WHY DO YOU THINK THAT MONEY SHOULD BE SPENT ELSEWHERE INSTEAD OF ARTS.

BUT THE ESSAY ANSWERS THE QUESTION THAT WHY MONEY SHOULD BE SPENT ON HEALTH AND EDUCATION INSTEAD OF ARTS