Essay check-140 Countries are becoming more and more similar because people are able to buy the same products anywhere in the world. Do you think this is positive or negative development?

A paradigm shift of similarity among many counties is observed because purchasing the same product has become easy in any part of globe. In my opinion COMMA people being able to shop the same things from anywhere in the world shows a positive development.

Beginning with the positives, the ease of access to foreign-made productS make people happy. This means that they are able to buy and use a specialty product that is not manufactured or produced locally. For example, Harley Davidson bike, until recent/RECENTLY it was not manufactured in India and all the way imported from their factory in Austria and people used to feel pleasured/HAPPY by purchasing this bike. Furthermore, this phenomenon helps people financially because of the export, demand of the product increases hence more product needs to be produced. Therefore, it gives a rise to employment opportunities. Also, a positive upside of such a development is that immigrants from other countries are able to buy the products of their daily needs, specially food items as the foods preferred in different countries varies largely.

On the other hand, it seems that this phenomenon may lead to lost opportunities of tourism for a few countries. For instance, Bhutan’s capital, Thimphu is famous for articles made from bamboos where people from across the globe specially travel to buy these handmade articles. However, there are other alternatives to this, which may serve as better option for people to travel to Bhutan, not to mention the scenic beauty. Furthermore, if these products are made available to other counties it may aid to the country’s economy by providing business opportunities.

In conclusion, although there are certain drawbacks associated with the globalization of products, the benefit in the form of increased sources of employment and people deriving pleasure by purchasing the products outweighs them.

CORRECTION:-

CONCLUSION IS MORE TOWARDS ANSWERING THE QUESTION “DO ADVANTAGES OUTWEIGH DISADVANTAGES” RATHER THAN EXPLAINING “WHETEHR ITS A POSITIVE OR NEGATIVE DEVELOPMENT”IF YOU FEEL ITS A POSITIVE DEVELOPMENT, ONLY MENTION THE POSITIVE ASPECTS IN THE ESSAY. AVOID CREATING EXTRA LONG SENTENCES, BECAUSE IT CHANGES THE MEANING.CHECK YOUR GRAMMAR IN GRAMMARLY AFTER WRITING THE ESSAY